Birthday Bash: 12:30pm-CWAHM

Jill Hart from CWAHM will be sharing on the Art of Eloquence Facebook fan page this Birthday Bash half hour.  Here is what she is offering as a prize for this half hour’s contest:rom CWAHM.com

Button ad $60 Value!

Reach 22,000+ women every month!
* Placed in the Lower Right-Hand column on EVERY PAGE
* 4 weeks
* 125 x 125 graphic
* .gif or .jpg files only (No Flash files – .swf )
* Will include a link directly to your website.

To win this prize, you will need to post a comment to this blog post answering this question:  Name two of your favorite Art of Eloquence studies listed on our Business Communication page!

We’ll be picking a winner from among the correct answers and contacting you via email so make sure you leave your email address on your comment post.

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(DISCLAIMER: Communication FUNdamentals, our blog, normally only posts three times a week (MWF) but today we are having a new post/contest each half hour of the Birthday Bash.)

Congratulations to our Winner: Emily Sather!

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Effective Email Pt 5-Sig line

If you are just joining this article series, here is a quick recap.  Email has become a common form of communication in recent years, but so much of it is misunderstood that there are more communication issues with this form than there are with all the other forms put together.  So much of how we communicate face-to-face is received through body language, facial expression and tone of voice.  This is all lost in an email where we have to rely only on the words we choose.  So far I shared about the importance of choosing a good email address, your subject line and given you some tips for a more effective body of text in two parts. Today I’d like to talk about your signature line.

What should be in your signature line? 

* Your name…your FULL name!

I can’t tell you how many times I’ve received an email that was unsigned.  Makes it difficult to address the reply.  Dear 1234567@aol.com…

Even signing your first name may not be of great help.  I may not have the brain cells at 49 to remember your email address letter for letter so I’m not sure if you are Mary or Mary.  Mary Jones wanted to borrow my grey jacket but Mary Peterson wanted to come over for lunch at noon on Friday.  I’m not sure how to respond to Mary if the only thing I have to go on is an email note that says “So, is it okay?” signed Mary.  My brain immediately goes TILT as I try to remember if Mary’s email address is 6427@aol.com or is it the other Mary whose email address is 6247@aol.com.  AHHHH!

Now if you email for business, use your full name.  There may be other Bobs at ABC Company. After all, they do have 600,000 employees!

* Your title if you are in a large company

If you are emailing for business, always include your title in your signature line so folks will know what you do at the company.  It tells them what questions they may ask, what answers they can expect and gives you an air of authority when you answer difficult questions.

* A clickable website address

If you put your business or blog url in your signature line, for pitty’s sake, make it clickable!  I can’t tell you how frustrated I get as I to try to copy and paste it into a browser and have to put the “http://www.” on it.   I know it’s not all that much work, but I’m 49.  I’m going through menopause and I get a bit testy when I have to work harder than I feel I should!  HELP ME OUT, will ya?

Now on the flip side, do you know the chances of someone clicking through to your website vs copying it and pasting it into their browser?  Neither do I, but I’ll bet it’s LOTS!  The easier you make it for people, the more likely they will do something!

* How else to get hold of you

If you are emailing for business and you have several ways your customers can get hold of you, list them!  If you don’t mind being called, list your phone number.  If you don’t mind being texted, faxed, or you can interpret smoke signals, list your call sign!  That way if Mary doesn’t do well with email, she can call instead.

* Scripture or tag line

If you have a life scripture or tag line for your business, list it below your signature.  That gives your recipient a bit more information about you.  Always a nice touch to make an email a bit more personal and descriptive of you.  Helps with rapport!

What shouldn’t be your signature line? 

* Offensive words or negative comments

It pretty much goes without saying, that you shouldn’t put vulgar language in your email signature, but you wouldn’t believe the number of times I have seen negative comments in there!  I’ve had personal emails come through with things like, “John Smith, waiting for the day when I don’t have to live with my MIL!”  Uh…not good form.

* An ad

A tag line or signature verse is one thing, but don’t put an ad in there.  The first thing I think of when I see that is, Don’t Push Me!  lol

Kim Berly, 

http://www. I Want To Sell You Stuff.com

Buy three and get six free!  No shipping! Sale ends in five minutes!  Order NOW!

I SAID NOW!

Yup… just a bit pushy…

* A book

Research shows that people don’t like to read long text copy on emails.  If you’ve got that much information in your signature line, put it in a PDF, okay?  I don’t need your biography, your credentials, your pedigree or the history and evolution of your rise to corporate power!  I won’t read it.  ANY of it!

Well, that’s it for email signature lines.  Join me on Wednesday when I give you some tips for what to send and what NOT to send.

Until then…

Sincerely yours,

Me!

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Whine and Please Marketing

All this month I’ve been sharing from my article, “12 Deadly Communication Sins of Advertising” and today’s installment is about whining.  As mom would say…

Have Some Whine with That Cheese.
Be careful to look over your marketing message for anything that might seem unprofessional for your industry before it is sent out. Have you ever looked at some of those infomercials and cable TV commercials? Some of them make my daughter cringe. You may be a small business with a small budget, but you don’t want to give the impression that you are a cheesy, cheap company.

Aside from the issues I mentioned in previous posts like poor spelling or feigning ignorance, one of the ways small business owners can be cheesy in their marketing is to advertise that they are just starting out and still learning their craft.  Everyone’s got to start somewhere, but it’s never an effective strategy to admit you are green.  As I said in my previous post, nobody wants to pay an amateur.  They want a professional.  Most skills do require ongoing education.  However, if you are still learning or honing your craft, it’s probably best not to charge for your services until you have reached mastery.

I’ve seen many an email ad go out over a Yahoo group that announced a new web design business where the new owner of the website asked her customers to understand that she was still trying to figure out how to create a shopping cart on her site.  Hmm…  Not sure someone would want to part with their hard earned cash to pay someone to create their website if they really don’t know how to do that.

Now if you are a photographer or a pencil artist and you are having trouble with your site, it doesn’t tarnish your professional reputation to admit that in your monthly ad post because it’s not in your area of expertise.  On the other hand, I’ve seen marketing ads that claim to be able to take your website from rags to riches in a month advertise a Lay Away Sale so they could raise $300 to get their dd’s Christmas presents out of hock at JC Penny.  In fact, she was selling an eBook with a title that said something like, “How to make $500 in a two weeks.”

That brings me to another somewhat cheesy tactic: to whine.  While it is possible, especially in these difficult financial times, to have a true financial need, it is quite another thing altogether to whine at people and expect them to purchase substandard products just to help you out.  And if you think this hasn’t been done, you are mistaken.  I’ve seen it many times, usually on Yahoo groups for work at home moms.

Mary posts often that she is not making any money with her craft business.  She posts how it is difficult for her to get good quality materials and how she has had several complaints about the paint rubbing off the wood.  She also admits that she has had a problem keeping up with the orders and has had to delay delivery to customers by about three weeks.  Then, one day, Mary posts that they are going to turn her electric off unless she raises $200 by Thursday and can folks see their way clear to order her crafts and wait three weeks for delivery so that she can afford to buy more supplies. Not only have I seen this done, but I’ve seen the posts put through complaining that nobody is taking advantage of her offer.

Especially in these hard times, there is no shame in admitting to your customers that you have a financial need, but do understand that you’ll need to offer quality products at a reasonable price.  Oh, and please don’t whine at those who choose not to take advantage of your offer.  They have issues of their own.

What say you?  I’d love your thoughts.  Any experience with whine and please marketing?

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Honesty in Advertising?

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Ad Quality

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I think they missed word….

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